"Everyone wants everything and that too for cheap. They don't care how much effort and money goes into making something. They just want it at their own price.", she informed the old woman selling chikki made of peanuts and jaggery, in her shrill voice. She had chosen not to sit but to stand near the door and let the stale, rancid air of Mumbai pretend to be a pleasing breeze. She looked a little bizarre at first glance but a careful inspection showed that the dress had been put together with much care. It mimicked the retro look popularised by the movie "Om Shanti Om". Her hair was held back with a flimsy scarf while the blue of her salwar-kameez matched the colour of the one flaunted by the heroine. The bell sleeves, the glittering beads at the neck, the tight chudidar, the transparent dupatta, everything put together carefully. She wore large hoops in her ears, with a silver thimble adorning them, like a jarring note in a badly composed piece of music. She was old, trying to look young. Her lower lip jutted out, her teeth were stained with tobacco and her eyes closed to slits every time she flashed her toothy smile. The old woman merely sighed and lay down on the empty seat. The chikki cast aside. A baby squealed playfully in her mother's arms and stared at the world with her wide open eyes. She held out her arms but the baby shied away, burrowing her face is her mother's shoulder. "Your baby girl is very chirpy." she said "Isn't it? So bubbly and pretty. Aren't you? Will you come with me to do some business?" Business, dhanda, she said. And yet there was no malice in the word that is usually considered to be derogatory. For her it was a way of life. She failed to see the difference. It was just like selling sweets made of peanuts and jaggery. But for the right price.Wednesday, November 26, 2008
Andheri slow - II class
"Everyone wants everything and that too for cheap. They don't care how much effort and money goes into making something. They just want it at their own price.", she informed the old woman selling chikki made of peanuts and jaggery, in her shrill voice. She had chosen not to sit but to stand near the door and let the stale, rancid air of Mumbai pretend to be a pleasing breeze. She looked a little bizarre at first glance but a careful inspection showed that the dress had been put together with much care. It mimicked the retro look popularised by the movie "Om Shanti Om". Her hair was held back with a flimsy scarf while the blue of her salwar-kameez matched the colour of the one flaunted by the heroine. The bell sleeves, the glittering beads at the neck, the tight chudidar, the transparent dupatta, everything put together carefully. She wore large hoops in her ears, with a silver thimble adorning them, like a jarring note in a badly composed piece of music. She was old, trying to look young. Her lower lip jutted out, her teeth were stained with tobacco and her eyes closed to slits every time she flashed her toothy smile. The old woman merely sighed and lay down on the empty seat. The chikki cast aside. A baby squealed playfully in her mother's arms and stared at the world with her wide open eyes. She held out her arms but the baby shied away, burrowing her face is her mother's shoulder. "Your baby girl is very chirpy." she said "Isn't it? So bubbly and pretty. Aren't you? Will you come with me to do some business?" Business, dhanda, she said. And yet there was no malice in the word that is usually considered to be derogatory. For her it was a way of life. She failed to see the difference. It was just like selling sweets made of peanuts and jaggery. But for the right price.Posted by niv at 4:21 PM
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6 comments:
So subtle... never once i realized while reading it, that its gonna end up talking of the grim reality, a tragic truth, that is the livelihood of thousands of women...
i know it sounds crazy in a country like ours, but maybe its time that we looked at legalizing the trade... at least than the workers wouldn't be exploited as much as they are right now. insurance benefits, awareness about the diseases are jus a couple of reasons that come to mind at the moment...
you are good at verses, but with prose, you come into ur own element.. :)
p.s. hope everythin's fine at ur end post the attacks..
alien: hey.. thanks...
ya.. actually legalizing the trade would make a lot of sense... its not about to disappear from the society.. the least we can do is improve the conditions under which these women live...no, survive would be a more appropriate word...
i was at home when the attacks happened so all's well with me though the situation was obviously very grim...i have come across people who are actually making jokes about it.. i can't understand how or why...
anyway... people are strange and just keep getting stranger..
keep visiting... :)
I have done a research on this and have asked ppl arnd on their thots of legalizin this but most of the ppl jus feel that legalizing it wud only encourage the whole business..its a very subjective issue and still considered a taboo by the indian society..has its set of pros and cons..very well written..i felt i was ryt der viewing all of this..
pooja: ya.. i knw about that project that u did... u mentioned once... thats the problem...issues like prostitution and homosexuality lie somewhere in the grey areas of the society's structure... so no decisive steps can be taken.. and the debate rages on...
Pooja: and thanks.. nice seeing u here.. :)
hmm.. yeah its strnge.. nd its sickening.. maybe they'd feel something when it actually hits someone close to them, god forbid...
nd dnt u worry.. am not going anywhere.. jus keep writin ;P
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