an endless blue sky
bereft of clouds
a silent, placid sea
at the beginning of time
i remember
it was only you and me
the sand glinting golden
the wind dancing free
at the beginning of time
i remember
it was only you and me
no thoughts, no words
no explanations or pleas
at the beginning of time
i remember
it was only you and me
time slips, the hour-glass tips
memories cloud, the heart skips
the world crowds in
like a raging sea
it ends with you and i
what had begun with we
7 comments:
"it ends with you and i
what had begun with we"
says it all...
you've grown since the last time i read ur poems....
its beautiful... a few lines but speaks of a lifetime! :)
Mana
alien/mana: i was afraid it would end up sounding like a retarded song by one of the many miserable, depressed, mending their broken relationships, substance abuse suffering singers..which is why i cynically titled it "just whatever"...but i think i just about saved it from that fate... he he...
lolz... who cares as to what it comes out like... remember, we write for ourselves.. if others like it, thats jus a bonus.. ;P
alien: a cool way to look at it... will always keep that in mind.. :)
the lies alien quoted are the ones i liked best too.
good good :)
*lines
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