Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Tich

I wish I was prettier - said she.
Under the blanket pitched like a tent,
the torchlight pointed straight at her face.
A pale ghost, slightly cold to touch.
She was falling to pieces.
Cracks were opening up
and the world was tumbling
into her like a salty ocean.
The night was mushrooming
on her skin like pestilent clouds.
But she cared not.
She just wanted to be prettier.
For me.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear Nivedita,

I have read everything u wrote on this blog...
inspite of reading everything i just know one thing about you...(I am not being judgemental)

either u have experienced everything in life or you are a real genius with an extraordinary mind....

whatever it may be i wud just say onething ....YOU ROCK
:)

/m/

Anonymous said...

KEEP WRITING :)

Nivedita Agashe said...

for the sake of a non-boring life (the excitement is kind of dead if i have experienced everything, right?) i hope i am a genius with an extraordinary mind . ;) haha. anyway. thanks a lot for your comment. do keep reading

P.S. i do not get why people choose to sign in as anonymous.

selvinsj said...

Hi Nevedita, I happy that I stumbled upon your blg. How are you? I am Fr.Selvin, a classmate for a brief period at Pune Univestity. I love poetry. You surely have way with words..you paint with words effortlessly. All the best. It's a special talent. I am in Bangalore right now.. God Bless You. How is your mum? Keep writing...keep discovering..

Nivedita Agashe said...

Hey Selvin.. So nice to see you here... I'm good..working as a writer with an ad agency in bombay..manu is in mumbai too... my mom has shifted to nagpur to stay with my granny..she is fine too... hope you are doing well...thanks a lot for your comment..and your good wishes.. do keep in touch.. :)

Anonymous said...

Hi - I am really delighted to discover this. great job!

Divya said...

Hey Nivedita!This is Divya..met you on the day of Xavier's interview...long long back...we were in the same group..i quite like the way you write..always take back something special from here...keep killing it like you always do! :)

Nivedita Agashe said...

@divya: Hey... Thank you so much... yeah.. XIC does seem like a long time back.. we are all getting old i guess..hehe.. haven't written anything in a while... kind of bothering me now.. hopefully i'll get a new post up soon :)